COMPOSITION1 & 2 ♥

.Both COMPOSITION were about three kinds of cooks including the terrible cooks, the coping cooks, and the good cooks.


♥ ♥ After I read, I prefer the second composition because it have specific detail and have more example. It also create pictures in my mine. Example, composition number 2 wrote like "THE PORK IS SO SWEET THAT IT REMINDS YOU OF CANDY" but the first composition didn't give any example of terrible cooks. I think that Ilike the second one 'cause it is more fun to read and it is also easier to understand too:)